Second Draft - Future Car

 Winder

                     There are many cars in the world. Have you ever thought about cars in the future? 50 or 100 years later. What does it look like?
                    The car in my mind name is "Winder". It has 4 wheels like a normal car but very spacial. Of cause! my car will be very light, fluent, not too large as well as stunning. This car is made from the greatest materials. Furthermore it is the fastest car,460 kilometers per hour. Very very fast car! because use wind energy as fuel it makes good environment. This is reasons how Winder got its name. Other from this, the car can drive on the water include can use without human. The car will be sold 5 millions bath. It is reasonable price!
                     This is the car that I would like to drive the most. Because it is beyond and eco-friendly so If it will true in the future I will buy it. 

First Draft - Future Car

    Winder

                      There are many cars in the world. In the future 50 years or 100 years ago. What does it look like?  The car in my mind name is Winder. It has 4 wheels like a normal car but very special. It is very light, fluent, stunning and not too large. This car is the fastest car, 460 kilometers per hour. It is very fast because use wind energy as fuel so it makes good environment. Other from this, the car can drive on the water and it can use without human. This is the car that I would like to drive it the most and I will buy it.

Outline - Future Car

The Future Car

1. What is the name of your car?        'Winder' 

2. What does it look like?                   It has 4 wheels like a normal car, very light, fluent, not too

                                                            large and stunning.

3. What kind of fuel does it use?        Wind energy.

4. How many kilometers per hour?    460 kilometers per hour.

5. How much does it cost?                  5 Millions Baht.

6. What does it can do?                       This car is very very fast. It use wind energy as fuel. Drive on
                                                             the water and it can use without human.

                   

Second Draft

Michael Phelps

                 This is the most talent swimmer in the USA. His name is Michael Phelps. He was born in Maryland,USA. He has short hair, white skin, and handsome. Not only very tall but also he has very strong body because he practices swimming hard as well as take care of himself well. Now he is 31 years old, looks young too. When he was a child, began to swim at 7 years old. He got the inspiration from his 2 older sister because they are swimmer too. So he competed in Olympic Games. That time he was 15 years old. Amazing guy!!

                  His main competition is Olympic Games such as in Greece, Chine etc. Latest he competed in Rio 2016 and won very competitions. Absolutely it's gold medals. So he is an American Swimmer of the USA.

                  I like him because he has very strong body. He attempted until he is very famous and success in this sport. Furthermore people call him that the fastest swimmer in the world. 

First Draft

Michael  Phelps

                 This is the most talent swimmer in the USA. His name is Michael Phelps. He was born in Maryland,USA. He has short hair and  white skin. Not only very tall but also very strong body. Now he is 31 years old, looks young too. He began to swim at 7 years old. He got the inspiration from his 2 older sister because they are swimmer too. So he competed Summer Olympics Games 2000 in Sydney when he was 15 years old

                  His main competition is Olympic Games such as Summer Olympic Games 2004 in Greece, Summer Olympic Games 2008 in Chine etc. He won very medals and he was selected to be American Swimmer of the USA.

                  I like him because he has very strong. He attempted so he is very famous and has been success in this sport.